Saturday, August 06, 2005

10 years ago...

you are a vision.
an apparition.
an illusion.
you are my dream.
untouched.
unreachable.
a wiff of fancy
turning into fantasy.
you come to me
on wings
of vagary.
I look.
you never fail
to vanish.

21 Comments:

Blogger AmitL said...

Nice...indeedy,dreams do vanish,always,don't they?

3:51 PM  
Blogger Sudipta Chatterjee said...

"10 years ago" ... that is what has left me clueless... the rest of it seems to point to something, but the title changes it back to a haze, much like what it must be to you right now :)

5:22 PM  
Blogger Pallavi said...

Nice :) you must poem more often.. :) Horu maas dangor mass. maas maas maas... hahaha !!! Bangalore ahi ja.. beer can khulim party korim.. Rocks roi asse kiba occasion or karone.. :)

11:41 PM  
Blogger deni said...

I just wanted to stop by and say thanks for visiting my blog and the nice compliment. No, I don't write professionally.

1:50 AM  
Blogger transience said...

this was so poignant. thank you for writing it.

1:29 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

is ur break anything to do with turning the fantasy into reality??

bips

4:14 PM  
Blogger venkat said...

NICE..HOPE ENJOYING LIFE UNBURDNED WITH WORK. Did you hear "CELTIC WOMEN" when your friend "cat" came to visit? Five very very beautiful Irish women with sweetest voices made a CD and you may like it!

9:52 AM  
Blogger Rat said...

Hidden poetic talents !! :) We want more.

1:10 PM  
Blogger Gangadhar said...

Beautiful verse!!

11:11 AM  
Blogger raxterize said...

Hey...long time and all that..

Nice stuff. Sort of reminded me of something.

PS: Its wHiff isnt it ?

Have a fabulous day.

1:37 PM  
Blogger Weary Hag said...

This is lovely poetry. AHA! So I see you are multi-talented.

Thanks for being such a faithful visitor to my blog ~ always appreciated!

4:46 PM  
Blogger hope and love said...

was the dream realized.. ?

5:31 PM  
Blogger AmitKen said...

Nice.. very nice :)

6:43 PM  
Blogger shlok said...

Beautiful. Conveys so much in so few words.

8:59 PM  
Blogger Stone said...

:-)

10:56 AM  
Blogger gulnaz said...

hey my comment has vanished! :(
anyway...its beautiful how you have captured the essence of elusiveness. excellent.

3:32 PM  
Blogger 100hands said...

Talk talk!

6:48 PM  
Blogger Mint Chutney said...

Very, VERY, nice.

7:58 PM  
Blogger boabhan sith said...

That was beautiful!

12:04 AM  
Blogger anumita said...

amitl: Not always. Not always.

sudipta: VERY similar to something I wrote 10 years ago in my diary.

pallavi: Ahim, beer khabo ahim. Tohot maas mangso khai ghuri aah!

dl: Then you should start. :)

transience: thanks. :)

bips: Now that you mention, maybe yes, fantasy remaining signs of remaining just that!

venkat: No, it was the cow, not cat. And we didn't really discuss music in the little time we spent together.

rat: We try, you know. :)

gangadhar: Thank you.

raxterize: I guess, we can take a little liberty when we write our own poetry. The "h" made the word look harsh, so I did away with it.

weary hag: I love your blog, so I go. Thank you for letting us read.

hope n love: Nope.

amitken: Thank you.

shlok: Thank you and welcome.

stone: :-)

gulnaz: Comment disappeared? Thanks to the brilliant writer herself.

100hands: Too late now. Welcome.

mint, boabhan sith: Thanks, guys.

11:08 AM  
Blogger Abhishek said...

really nice.good inspiring thoughts.
someone once said good times dont remain for long and so do bad times.
sctually its none others thought than mine. :)

5:24 PM  

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